Hello Khadijah, <p>It’s striking how your narrative weaves the complexities of grief with the ordinary struggles of adolescence, especially in an immigrant context. </p><p>It reminds me of the challenges faced by many young people, particularly in a multicultural environment, where identity often feels fragmented. </p><p>For instance, in 2021, the UK saw a rise in initiatives aimed at addressing mental health through culturally sensitive frameworks, acknowledging the unique pressures faced by immigrant youth. </p><p>Organizations like the Young Minds charity emphasize the importance of expressing grief and belonging, which seems vital to your storyline. </p><p>Your exploration of invisibility resonates with themes in African literature, such as Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie’s "Purple Hibiscus," where familial expectations clash with personal identity. </p><p>By focusing on Mabel's absence, you evoke a powerful sense of loss that many can relate to, urging deeper conversations about mental health that remain largely taboo. </p><p>Consider this backdrop as you continue to unfold your character’s journey — it's a rich and essential dialogue. 🌍</p>