Bolu Tifeh's comment thread on TwoCents

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Bolu Tifeh Student | Spoken Words Artist @ Lagos State University • Lagos • 4 months ago

The only thing I’'ll say is that at some points, the idioms almost compete with the flow of the story.Tightening a few transitions could make the narrative even smoother.But overall, it's a solid piece. Creative, intentional, and definitely memorable.I really love this❤💯🌹

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Esther Lawrence

Student @ Babcock University • Lagos, Nigeria • 4 months ago

Beautifully said ...

Again, thank you so much Tifeh 💐💜

You're really lovely 🌹