Cyrus Majebi's comment thread on TwoCents

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Cyrus Majebi

Co-founder @ TwoCents, plugME • Lagos • 9 months ago

....her 'plot twists and things'..."....I continued reading, the smile fading gradually because I suspected you may twist the plot even further...And you did..."They think it was an accident.....And it will stay that way."and I'm like "I knew it...., I knew you'd throw in another....".And then, after reading the last sentence,  I cracked a big one, because, honestly, you brought the entire thing together so well, in the way we have come to expect from you 💙,

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Cyrus Majebi

Co-founder @ TwoCents, plugME • Lagos, Nigeria • 9 months ago

Honestly, I loved it! Every single thing about it💯

Maq

Writer • Abuja, Nigeria • 9 months ago

The first draft of this story actually had a normal ending, with no more than one twist 😂 But it sounded so wrong and I knew I couldn't submit it that way, hence the twist at the end ☺️

The ending may be bittersweet but I promise, it's better this way 😅🖤