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Donald Jacob Design Engineering @ Self Employed • Uyo • 1 year, 9 months ago

Detachment. I believe that is another suitable title. Let me know if I'm wrong. Also, I didn't understand this sentence- "But not before gratitude for the second chance." Irrespective, it was a beautiful read.

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Donald Jacob Design Engineering @ Self Employed • Uyo, Nigeria • 1 year, 9 months ago

Well understood

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Chidera Odom

Restaurant Operations Manager @ Sundry Foods Ltd • Benin City, Nigeria • 1 year, 9 months ago

Detachment, as a title could work. I chose "Scarred" though because scarring is a sign of healing or at least the beginnings of it. The main character in the poem was given another chance through her realization and healing, and in the person of the "stranger". A second chance that hopefully will not include pain and painful memories.

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