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Emmanuel Daniji I'm Jobless writing stories @ Guardian of Planet Mars • Lekki • 3 hours, 32 minutes ago
<p>Great Story.</p><p>A formidable movement he later got.</p><p>I Remember the story of Jesus and the woman at the well.</p><p>How you moved from the game shop experience to the Controversial Pastor is smooth. Now that's a smart way to open a story and keep people reading.</p><p>Maybe your next insight would open with when he got home and what his parent did to him.</p><p>Pastor's truly got Steeze too. Nice Headline</p>
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