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Farouq Baturen Shanu

Momma's Boy @ Abubakar Tafawa Balewa University Bauchi • Bauchi • 3 weeks, 2 days ago

<p>This is rhythmically soothing for the most part though I feel a few lines are a bit too long and jarring. It breaks rhythm a bit. Very good poem overall. I love the rhyme tooo. Good stuff</p>

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Coward Pen Student @ University of Ibadan • Ebute Ikorodu, Nigeria • 3 weeks, 1 day ago

I'll adhere

Thanks bard