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Farouq Baturen Shanu Momma's Boy @ Abubakar Tafawa Balewa University Bauchi • Bauchi • 1 day, 23 hours ago
<p>Okay</p><p>Okayyyy</p><p>I like when people take inspiration from images to write a piece reflective of the piece. You did something rather brilliant here. You made it less about physical drowning and more about suffocation by life's trials. Just like drowning in water, it constructs your breathing, weighs in your heart and mind and tried to sink you to the bottom. You've basically weaved a vivid metaphor about how things can overwhelm you so much so that you feel like you're literally drowning.</p><p>Beautiful</p>
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