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Farouq Baturen Shanu

Momma's Boy @ Abubakar Tafawa Balewa University Bauchi • Bauchi • 2 days, 7 hours ago

<p>One thing I really adore is how you begin with a hook. An interesting line, a though provoking statement. That's definitely an effective way to grip the reader. I see this part shifts focus to the aftermath of the loss of Leila and how she's only now realizing how close she and Leila were. It's haunting. And her relationship with Aaron is pretty charming ad well. They are distant and close at the same time. And TJ, what is he still doing here 😭</p>

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