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Khadijah Mohammed

I live there @ Abuja • Abuja • 2 weeks, 3 days ago

<p>The contrast between the "good story" and "gory story" sections works really well structurally, laying out both possible paths so plainly before circling back to "it's not too late to stick to the plan." Good use of repetition with "Anomaly" as a recurring anchor throughout.</p>

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