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Mercy Daniel Entrepreneur, student, communicator @ Prince Abubakar Aud... • Lagos • 1 week, 1 day ago
<p>Your use of repetition, especially ‘Pain,’ makes the piece feel intense and almost overwhelming—which fits the experience you’re trying to portray. You did a great job turning something difficult to explain into something readers can emotionally picture.</p>
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