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Muhammad Mercurial • Abuja • 4 months, 2 weeks ago
<p>2/2</p><p>However, yr writing style here occasionally becomes too explanatory, stating ideas instead of embodying them.</p><p>You use more imagery or subtle scene, building would deepen its literary effect.</p><p>Finally, it’s a thoughtful, morally grounded piece that emphasizes respect over mere permission as the foundation of intimacy</p><p>Kudos to you and we are looking forward to see your next piece</p>
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