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Muhammad Mercurial • Abuja • 4 months, 2 weeks ago
<p>Dis is intense, vivid, and emotionally charged, with strong imagery that captures rage, loss, and inner conflict.</p><p>D metaphors, especially the cheetah and gazelle, the transformation into an animal, and the concept of “SISU” effectively convey a descent into raw instinct and suppressed anger.</p><p>Yr language is bold and expressive, buh at times it becomes dense and slightly repetitive, which can blur the clarity of your message; tightening a few lines and simplifying some phrases will</p><p>1/2</p>
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