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Muhammad Mercurial • Abuja • 3 months, 1 week ago
<p>This is haunting and tightly controlled. This obituary format works as a mask for guilt, memory, and self-editing and the repetition of ''Let me try again'' is very effective in showing a mind trying to rewrite its own truth.</p><p>The voice is one of your strongest tools, calm on the surface, heavy underneath.</p><p>Your ending is impactful. but it fully resolves what the earlier sections were deliberately leaving in tension</p>
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Maq Writer • Abuja, Nigeria • 1 month, 3 weeks ago

Thank you 😊

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