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Muhammad Mercurial • Abuja • 3 months, 1 week ago
<p>Bro thig didn’t read like a story alone; it read like Lagos staring at itself in the mirror for the first time</p><p>Lykkkkkk! Yr pacing, the dialogue, the cultural texture , Habaaaaa sharp. But the strongest thing here is how Zee dismantled a man without shouting. “E for cost your self-respect” is the kind of line that follows both the character and the reader home.</p><p>David you cooked heavily here. Keep writing stories that expose the emptiness behind performance. respect. 🫡🖋️</p>
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