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Muhammad Mercurial • Abuja • 3 months ago
<p>This is clear and structured, buh it reads more like a school essay than a lived experience.</p><p>It repeats ideas about women being strong instead of showing that strength through real, specific moments.</p><p>It needs a sharper voice, fewer general statements, and more emotional imagery to feel memorable...</p>
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