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Muhammad Mercurial • Abuja • 1 month ago
<p>😂😂 Lord, is this a scam or You at work?" had me laughing, then the story just kept getting crazier.</p><p>I love the humour and the pacing it reads like someone gist-ing you in person.</p><p>One small suggestion though: be careful not to pile too many punchlines together.</p><p>Some emotional moments, like Emeka losing his savings, deserve a little breathing room before the next joke lands. Overall, this was an entertaining read, and that ending definitely hooked me.</p><p>Looking forward to the next part!</p>
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