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Oluwanifemi Oretuyi • Lagos • 5 months, 3 weeks ago
<p>I won’t lie sha , this one surprised me a bit 😂cuz I’ve never seen you write something this long before, but the way you merged many of your previous write-ups into one story was actually very creative. The whole format made it feel like we were watching the same situation from different angles tbh</p><p>Your part felt calm but deep. It felt like someone who knows something meaningful is happening but is still choosing to observe instead of rushing into it.</p><p>Dan’s chapter though…</p>
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Esther Lawrence Student @ Babcock University • Lagos, Nigeria • 5 months, 3 weeks ago

Interesting perspective, Nifemi 😂😂😂....very interesting.....

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Oluwanifemi Oretuyi • Lagos, Nigeria • 5 months, 3 weeks ago

It’s idk too perfect 😭. The whole “patient between two wards” thing is kinda nice and very clever, but bro still somehow promised to visit Ilishan and Yaba.😭😭

Dee’s narration was too cool and mysterious too. The RSVP scene and the quiet ride home felt very cinematic…I’m leaning towards Dan being the lie🙂 cuz the whole story makes it seem like he is a victim and yet he made promises to visit both Ilishan and yaba😭

Still though, credit to you guys cuz this felt like a movie script. Part 2👀?

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