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Samuel Olarewaju Studying @ Federal University of Kashere Gombe state • Abuja • 4 hours, 24 minutes ago
<p>Omo! This is dark. I can't call this a beautiful insight because the way cas killed her ex husband is brutal and she's not even remorse about it.</p><p>I love how you show not tell— yiu literally create image in the mind of the reader, as I was picturing the whole scene in my brain.</p><p>You out us on suspense through out and the cliffhanger is great too</p><p>Now, I am curious, wanting to know what she does to her ex husband body. I hope she'll not mutilate it.</p><p>Beautifully written. Keep it up</p>
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