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Samuel Olarewaju Studying @ Federal University of Kashere Gombe state • Abuja • 3 weeks, 3 days ago
<p>This is great 👍🏽</p><p>But the ending part hurts gab. The way she lift her heart at the thought of seeing him finally seeing him, only for her to notice that a woman is beside him… seriously , theswitch is painful. I love how you didn’t over-explain the heartbreak. Those little gestures slipping under his arm and him pulling her closer highlights everything. And that last line? “The cold has been here this whole time. I’m only just feeling it.” That really got me.</p><p>Beautifully wroven</p>
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Maq Writer • Abuja, Nigeria • 1 week, 3 days ago

Thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️

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