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Samuel Olarewaju Studying @ Federal University of Kashere Gombe state • Abuja • 1 week, 6 days ago
<p>This one feels heavy in a way that stays with you. The imagery "imageerying" making the pain tangible, especially the repeated “one more” and the ending.</p><p>It reads like someone caught between wanting to escape the hurt and still trying to stay and endure or hold on</p><p>There’s so much emotion wrapped In every word, every line and I love that</p><p>and aslso that’s what makes this piece solid.</p><p>Beautifully written. Keep it up</p>
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Mannytheplaywright Student @ Redeemers University • Lagos, Nigeria • 1 week, 5 days ago

Everything was poured into this piece I'll tell you that, thank you 🫶🏾✨

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