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Samuel Olarewaju Studying @ Federal University of Kashere Gombe state • Abuja • 1 week, 6 days ago
<p>This ending is really intense.</p><p>The moment the monster appeared and the key needed blood had me hooked. I guess the monster was expecting the ending to go that way.</p><p>I liked how the sunlight breaking through and destroying everything it gave the scene a satisfying feeling of finally escaping the darkness.</p><p>And that last line, “I was finally free,” was simple but effective.</p><p>Is that the end of the story or you're planning to extend it?</p>
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Albarkawrites Student, writer. @ Federal University Oye-Ekiti • Ibadan, Nigeria • 1 week, 6 days ago

Thank you.

I think I will stop it here; what do you suggest?

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