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Samuel Olarewaju Studying @ Federal University of Kashere Gombe state • Abuja • 1 week, 5 days ago
<p>This opening grab my attention immediately. IThe “Who goes?” exchange between them felt so natural, and Nana already seems like a character with plenty of personality.</p><p>I also like how you slowly introduced their background instead of dumping everything at once.</p><p>These boys were just 12-year-olds trying to survive the streets, yet you’re already hinting at how far that life would take them. Now I’want to genuinely see how they became the Okirika Boys.</p><p>Beautifully written. Keep it up</p>
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