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Samuel Olarewaju Studying @ Federal University of Kashere Gombe state • Abuja • 1 week, 5 days ago
<p>I love this chapt.</p><p>The girls finally have the father they’ve always wanted, so it’s easy to understand why they ignore their mother’s warnings.</p><p>But the mother’s fear makes everything feel unsettling because we know she has a reason for being worried.</p><p>I also love how you didn’t reveal the secret too early. It keeps the suspense alive and makes me want to know what she knows.</p><p>I also love the cliffhangerr.</p><p>Beautifully written. Keep it up</p>
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Leeyah Jots Student @ Kwara State University • Lagos, Nigeria • 1 week, 5 days ago

Thank you 🤍

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