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Samuel Olarewaju Studying @ Federal University of Kashere Gombe state • Abuja • 1 week, 1 day ago
<p>This is great. I love the poems and the difference.</p><p>The 2025 version feels like someone looking for comfort in another broken thing, while the 2026 version feels much more personal and suffocating.</p><p>I’s almost like grief has moved from something the persona sits beside to something she’s struggling to separate herself from.</p><p>I also love the ending “If I become it, or it had become me.” It made me wonder how much of our pain eventually becomes part of what we are.</p><p>Beautifully written and......</p>
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