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Samuel Olarewaju Studying @ Federal University of Kashere Gombe state • Abuja • 4 days, 1 hour ago
<p>I love this! Thepoem is like being trapped inside your own head.</p><p>The castle, throne and darkness make the whole thing is hwavy, especially when you realize the person sitting on the throne isn't actually in control.</p><p>I love the part of “I sit on my throne, yet I rule not” as our thoughts can become so loud that they start making decisions for us.</p><p>I also love how you turned that inner struggle into a dark castle it makes the poem easy to picture.</p><p>I love your ink. Keep it up</p>
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