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Oluwaseun Balogun Student @ Redeemer’s University • Ibadan • 2 months ago
<p>I like how you borrowed the imagery and rhythm of Song of Solomon without making it feel like a copy. The repeated "Beautiful thinking" gives the piece a gentle cadence, and I especially love the ending: "Yet none is more beautiful than the thought of being loved by you." It shifts the focus from physical admiration to emotional longing, which ties the entire piece together beautifully. Nicely written. 🌹</p>
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Yahweh's Delight ✨❤️‍🔥 Author/Writer/Spoken word artist/Songwriter/Singer/Studen... • Awka, Nigeria • 2 months ago

Thanks 😊💗

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