Oluwaseun Balogun's comment thread on TwoCents

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Oluwaseun Balogun Student @ Redeemer’s University • Ibadan • 1 month, 3 weeks ago

<p>I can see the raw emotion in this. It feels like a mind trying to make sense of life, society, and responsibility all at once. My only thought is that if you refined the structure and tightened the message, this could become an even more powerful piece. There's a strong voice in here, don't lose it.</p>

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