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Gift Chioma Imaga-Oleh Nigeria
Student @ Babcock University
In Literature, Writing and Blogging 4 min read
4:00 A.M.
<p>Friday afternoon</p><p>I came home from school</p><p>still in my sports uniform,</p><p>dust on my socks,</p><p>carrying the ordinary weight of a normal day.</p><p><br/></p><p>Mummy was on the couch.</p><p><br/></p><p>“Good afternoon mummy,”</p><p>I said, hugging her.</p><p><br/></p><p>“Good afternoon,” she replied.</p><p>“How was school?”</p><p><br/></p><p>“School was fine, mumm.”</p><p><br/></p><p>I asked if she had eaten,</p><p>if she had taken her medicine.</p><p><br/></p><p>She said no.</p><p>But she had eaten cabbage.</p><p>A traditional healer said cabbage works.</p><p><br/></p><p>I went to bathe</p><p>and changed my clothes,</p><p>believing evening would pass</p><p>like every other evening.</p><p><br/></p><p>Later she was still there</p><p>on the couch</p><p>talking with my brother and my dad.</p><p><br/></p><p>I served dinner.</p><p>Oha soup and swallow</p><p>she cooked the previous day.</p><p><br/></p><p>I gave her a plate</p><p>and brought the medicinal tea</p><p>she always drank.</p><p><br/></p><p>For a year</p><p>my mother had been fighting something</p><p>a disease with no name.</p><p><br/></p><p>Hospitals tried.</p><p>Money tried.</p><p>Doctors tried.</p><p><br/></p><p>But answers never came.</p><p><br/></p><p>So we tried prayer.</p><p>We tried hope.</p><p>We tried a traditional healer.</p><p><br/></p><p>And she got better for a while</p><p>long enough</p><p>for me to believe</p><p>she would come back to us.</p><p><br/></p><p>Eight o’clock came.</p><p>Her food was untouched.</p><p><br/></p><p>“I’m not hungry,” she said.</p><p><br/></p><p>My brother called the healer.</p><p><br/></p><p>“Make her eat something,” he said.</p><p>Anything.</p><p><br/></p><p>So we made custard and bread.</p><p><br/></p><p>She took a few spoons</p><p>a few bites</p><p>and drank the tea.</p><p><br/></p><p>For a moment</p><p>that felt like enough.</p><p><br/></p><p>Nine o’clock</p><p>Dad went upstairs to rest.</p><p><br/></p><p>Ten o’clock.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then eleven.</p><p><br/></p><p>The coughing started.</p><p><br/></p><p>At first it sounded small</p><p>like something that would pass.</p><p><br/></p><p>But it didn’t pass.</p><p><br/></p><p>By eleven</p><p>the coughing grew louder</p><p>heavier</p><p><br/></p><p>until I saw blood.</p><p><br/></p><p>“Mummy please look at me,” I said.</p><p>“You will be fine.</p><p>You will be fine.”</p><p><br/></p><p>She looked at me</p><p>with tired eyes.</p><p><br/></p><p>Her mouth opened</p><p>as if she wanted to speak</p><p><br/></p><p>but the coughing came again</p><p>and again</p><p>and again.</p><p><br/></p><p>I ran upstairs.</p><p><br/></p><p>“Daddy, mummy’s condition is getting worse.”</p><p><br/></p><p>The estate ambulance was called.</p><p><br/></p><p>My brother and my father</p><p>rushed her to the hospital.</p><p><br/></p><p>It was midnight.</p><p><br/></p><p>I cried begging them</p><p>to let me follow.</p><p><br/></p><p>They said no.</p><p><br/></p><p>So I stayed behind</p><p>with fear sitting beside me</p><p>like a shadow that would not move.</p><p><br/></p><p>I prayed.</p><p><br/></p><p>I cried.</p><p><br/></p><p>I waited for the sound of the gate.</p><p><br/></p><p>I tried to stay awake</p><p>until sleep finally took me</p><p>around two a.m.,</p><p>my face stiff</p><p>with dried tears.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then at four a.m.</p><p>the bell rang.</p><p><br/></p><p>I ran downstairs</p><p>and opened the gate.</p><p><br/></p><p>My father stood there</p><p>with bloodshot eyes.</p><p><br/></p><p>My brother was sniffing.</p><p><br/></p><p>Behind them</p><p>stood our family friends.</p><p><br/></p><p>The wife hugged me.</p><p><br/></p><p>She was crying.</p><p><br/></p><p>“I’m sorry,” she said.</p><p><br/></p><p>My life never remained the same.</p>
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