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Onlyreal_Sochi Nigeria
Writer and Front End Developer @ Babcock University
Port Harcourt, Nigeria
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In Literature, Writing and Blogging 5 min read
THE LAST COUNTDOWN WAS NEVER FOR NEW YEAR
<p>You stop trying to escape when you realize the city is no longer repeating perfectly.</p><p><br/></p><p>Small errors creep in.</p><p><br/></p><p>A man laughs twice at the same joke, the sound overlapping itself. A woman walks past you, then walks past you again—same clothes, same smile, same phone countdown—but the second time her shadow moves in the wrong direction.</p><p><br/></p><p>The system is degrading.</p><p><br/></p><p>And somehow, you know why.</p><p><br/></p><p>Your countdown reads:</p><p><br/></p><p>00:04:12</p><p><br/></p><p>You don’t panic.</p><p><br/></p><p>That’s the worst part.</p><p><br/></p><p>You feel tired. Old. As if you’ve lived this moment so many times that fear wore itself out and left only recognition behind.</p><p><br/></p><p>You sit on the pavement and wait.</p><p><br/></p><p>Fireworks bloom overhead, silent as ever. Confetti drifts down, catching in your hair, sticking to your skin like static.</p><p><br/></p><p>A child runs past you, laughing.</p><p><br/></p><p>Her phone flashes 00:00:01.</p><p><br/></p><p>You look away before she disappears.</p><p><br/></p><p>You’ve learned that lesson already.</p><p><br/></p><p>⸻</p><p><br/></p><p>At 00:00:10, the world begins to look at you.</p><p><br/></p><p>Not people.</p><p><br/></p><p>The world itself.</p><p><br/></p><p>Billboards turn toward you. Cameras pivot. Reflections linger a fraction too long. Your shadow stretches upward instead of outward, thin and shaking like it’s trying to climb back inside you.</p><p><br/></p><p>Your phone buzzes one last time.</p><p><br/></p><p>SUBJECT STABILITY: CRITICAL</p><p><br/></p><p>AWARENESS LEVEL: UNACCEPTABLE</p><p><br/></p><p>READER PROXIMITY: DETECTED</p><p><br/></p><p>You swallow.</p><p><br/></p><p>“Reader?” you whisper.</p><p><br/></p><p>The word feels wrong in your mouth. Like you weren’t meant to know it.</p><p><br/></p><p>⸻</p><p><br/></p><p>Your countdown reaches zero.</p><p><br/></p><p>Nothing happens.</p><p><br/></p><p>No disappearance.</p><p><br/></p><p>No release.</p><p><br/></p><p>Instead, the numbers invert.</p><p><br/></p><p>They begin counting up.</p><p><br/></p><p>00:00:01</p><p>00:00:02</p><p><br/></p><p>Pain hits you all at once—not physical, but cognitive. Memories slam into you from every direction.</p><p><br/></p><p>Every loop.</p><p><br/></p><p>Every Year 0.</p><p><br/></p><p>Every time you reached awareness too late or too early.</p><p><br/></p><p>Every version of you that begged, screamed, denied, prayed.</p><p><br/></p><p>You remember the first time.</p><p><br/></p><p>You remember finishing the story.</p><p><br/></p><p>⸻</p><p><br/></p><p>You weren’t supposed to notice the countdown that time.</p><p><br/></p><p>You weren’t supposed to feel the dread linger after the last line.</p><p><br/></p><p>But you did.</p><p><br/></p><p>And curiosity—that quiet, human hunger—was enough.</p><p><br/></p><p>That’s all it ever takes.</p><p><br/></p><p>⸻</p><p><br/></p><p>The voice returns. Clearer now.</p><p><br/></p><p>Closer.</p><p><br/></p><p>“You always read to the end.”</p><p><br/></p><p>The city dissolves.</p><p><br/></p><p>You’re no longer standing in streets or fireworks or midnight. You’re standing in something white and endless, like a page before ink touches it.</p><p><br/></p><p>Words begin appearing in the air around you.</p><p><br/></p><p>Sentences.</p><p><br/></p><p>Paragraphs.</p><p><br/></p><p>Descriptions.</p><p><br/></p><p>Your thoughts.</p><p><br/></p><p>You try to move, but your body resists, locking into position like punctuation.</p><p><br/></p><p>“Do you understand now?” the voice asks.</p><p><br/></p><p>You do.</p><p><br/></p><p>And that’s the punishment.</p><p><br/></p><p>⸻</p><p><br/></p><p>You weren’t chosen because you were special.</p><p><br/></p><p>You were chosen because you engage.</p><p><br/></p><p>Because when a story feels wrong, you lean closer instead of backing away.</p><p><br/></p><p>Because you always need to know what happens next.</p><p><br/></p><p>The system doesn’t run on time.</p><p><br/></p><p>It runs on attention.</p><p><br/></p><p>⸻</p><p><br/></p><p>The final message appears—not on a phone, not on a screen, but inside your head, written in the same quiet certainty as a narrator who knows you can’t stop reading.</p><p><br/></p><p>THE LOOP CANNOT END WHILE IT IS OBSERVED.</p><p><br/></p><p>THE OBSERVER CANNOT LEAVE WHILE THEY ARE AWARE.</p><p><br/></p><p>You feel something shift.</p><p><br/></p><p>A presence.</p><p><br/></p><p>Not watching you.</p><p><br/></p><p>Reading with you.</p><p><br/></p><p>⸻</p><p><br/></p><p>And then the cruelest part:</p><p><br/></p><p>You are pushed backward.</p><p><br/></p><p>Out of the white.</p><p><br/></p><p>Out of the voice.</p><p><br/></p><p>Out of the story.</p><p><br/></p><p>You’re sitting wherever you are right now.</p><p><br/></p><p>Heart pounding.</p><p><br/></p><p>Breathing shallow.</p><p><br/></p><p>Safe.</p><p><br/></p><p>For half a second.</p><p><br/></p><p>Your phone vibrates.</p><p><br/></p><p>You tell yourself not to look.</p><p><br/></p><p>You tell yourself it’s just a story.</p><p><br/></p><p>You tell yourself you’re not like the others.</p><p><br/></p><p>You look anyway.</p><p><br/></p><p>The countdown is there.</p><p><br/></p><p>Not to midnight.</p><p><br/></p><p>Not to death.</p><p><br/></p><p>But to the moment you finish believing this isn’t real.</p><p><br/></p>

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