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Dahrhex Nigeria
Student @ Akwa Ibom State Polytechnic, Ikot Osurua
Port Harcourt, Nigeria
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In Literature, Writing and Blogging 2 min read
THE FIRST SENTENCE DECIDES WHETHER THEY STAY
<p>The woman slapped the table so hard that everyone in the room went silent.</p><p>“Tell me where my daughter is!”</p><p>The detective didn't answer.</p><p>He simply stared at her.</p><p>“Mrs. Williams,” he finally said, “your daughter wasn't kidnapped.”</p><p>The woman froze.</p><p>“What?”</p><p>“She left willingly.”</p><p>“That’s impossible.”</p><p>“I thought so too.”</p><p>The detective pushed a photograph across the table.</p><p>It showed her daughter standing outside a train station.</p><p>Alone.</p><p>Carrying a small black suitcase.</p><p>The mother stared at the photograph, her hands trembling.</p><p>“When was this taken?”</p><p>“Yesterday.”</p><p>She shook her head.</p><p>“No. My daughter disappeared three days ago.”</p><p>“I know.”</p><p>“Then how can this picture be from yesterday?”</p><p>The detective leaned back.</p><p>“That’s the problem.”</p><p>Silence.</p><p>The woman looked at him.</p><p>“What aren't you telling me?”</p><p>He reached into a folder and pulled out another photograph.</p><p>Then another.</p><p>Then another.</p><p>Her daughter's face appeared in all of them.</p><p>Different locations.</p><p>Different clothes.</p><p>Different days.</p><p>But there was something strange.</p><p>In every photograph...</p><p>She was looking directly at the camera.</p><p>The mother swallowed hard.</p><p>“Who's taking these pictures?”</p><p>The detective lowered his voice.</p><p>“We don't know.”</p><p>“Then find out!”</p><p>“We're trying.”</p><p>“No!” she shouted. “You're not trying hard enough!”</p><p>She stood up.</p><p>“You're sitting here showing me photographs while my daughter is somewhere out there!”</p><p>The detective stood too.</p><p>“You want the truth?”</p><p>“Yes!”</p><p>“Your daughter may not want to be found.”</p><p>The woman's face changed.</p><p>“What did you say?”</p><p>The detective opened the final file.</p><p>Inside was a handwritten note.</p><p>He slid it across the table.</p><p>The mother read it.</p><p>Her eyes widened.</p><p>The note contained only seven words:</p><p>“Mom, please don't let them find me.”</p><p>Her hands began to shake.</p><p>“Who are ‘they’?”</p><p>The detective didn't answer.</p><p>“Who are they?” she demanded again.</p><p>“We don't know.”</p><p>“Then what do you know?”</p><p>He stared at her for several seconds.</p><p>“We know your daughter bought a one-way ticket.”</p><p>“To where?”</p><p>“That's what we're trying to determine.”</p><p>“And the people following her?”</p><p>“We found no evidence that anyone was following her.”</p><p>The mother stared at the note.</p><p>“Then why would she write this?”</p><p>The detective leaned forward.</p><p>“That's exactly what I want to know.”</p><p>Suddenly, the detective's phone rang.</p><p>He glanced at the screen.</p><p>His expression changed.</p><p>“Hello?”</p><p>He listened.</p><p>His face slowly went pale.</p><p>The mother watched him.</p><p>“What happened?”</p><p>He didn't respond.</p><p>“Detective?”</p><p>He slowly lowered the phone.</p><p>“Your daughter just called.”</p><p>The mother jumped to her feet.</p><p>“Where is she?”</p><p>“She wouldn't tell us.”</p><p>“Give me the phone!”</p><p>“She hung up.”</p><p>“What did she say?”</p><p>The detective looked at her.</p><p>“She said something strange.”</p><p>“What?”</p><p>He hesitated.</p><p>“She said, ‘Tell my mother I'm sorry.’”</p><p>The woman's eyes filled with tears.</p><p>“That's it?”</p><p>“No.”</p><p>“What else did she say?”</p><p>The detective looked toward the door.</p><p>Then whispered:</p><p>“She said we're already too late.”</p><p><br/></p><p><strong>STAY TUNED...</strong></p>

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