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The Silent Pen 🖊 Nigeria
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The Last Meal On Olarenwaju Street
<p>Hey guys, I haven’t really been active for a while. Apologies for that. But yeah Im back with another one. Hope you’re ready for this.</p><p><br/></p><p>Rain began at exactly 8:13 p.m.</p><p>Not the normal Lagos rain that came with wind and noise and shouting conductors.<br/></p><p>This one fell quietly.<br/></p><p>Like the sky was trying not to wake something.<br/></p><p>The streets of Mushin emptied faster than usual. Shop owners dragged down rusty shutters. Danfo buses vanished from the road one after another until only puddles and flickering streetlights remained.<br/></p><p>Tunde noticed it because he was hungry.<br/></p><p>And because every food stall on the street had closed.<br/></p><p>Every single one except one.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>The small canteen stood at the end of Olanrewaju Street where no shop had ever lasted longer than a month. The signboard hanging above it swayed gently in the rain.</p><p><br/></p><p>MAMA RONKE’S KITCHEN</p><p>But Tunde had lived in Mushin for two years.<br/></p><p>There had never been a Mama Ronke.<br/></p><p>The place looked old. Too old. The zinc roof sagged like a tired back. Smoke drifted lazily from a charcoal stove outside, carrying the thick smell of stew and burnt pepper.<br/></p><p>His stomach tightened painfully.<br/></p><p>He checked his phone.<br/></p><p>8:13 p.m.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>Battery: 2%.</p><p>“No be today,” he muttered.<br/></p><p>The canteen had no customers.<br/></p><p>No music.</p><p>No voices.</p><p>Only a yellow lantern hanging by the entrance and the sound of soup bubbling somewhere inside.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>Tunde hesitated before stepping closer.</p><p><br/></p><p>The smell hit him harder now.</p><p>Rich jollof rice.<br/></p><p>Fried meat.<br/></p><p>Something sweet underneath it all.<br/></p><p>Something strange.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>An old woman emerged from the darkness behind the counter.</p><p>She looked… wrong.<br/></p><p>Not ugly.<br/></p><p>Just wrong.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>Her wrapper was spotless white despite the muddy rain outside. Her face looked stretched too tightly over her skull, and her eyes reflected the lantern light like a cat’s.</p><p><br/></p><p>When she smiled, Tunde felt cold.</p><p>“You’re hungry,” she said.<br/></p><p>It wasn’t a question.<br/></p><p>Her voice sounded dry. Like leaves scraping concrete.<br/></p><p>Tunde forced a laugh. “Aunty, how much rice?”<br/></p><p>“Sit first.”</p><p>Something about the way she said it made his chest tighten.</p><p><br/></p><p>Still…</p><p>Hunger won.<br/></p><p>He sat on the wooden bench near the entrance.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>The woman disappeared briefly into the darkness behind her, and Tunde noticed something strange immediately:</p><p><br/></p><p>There were no cooking sounds anymore.</p><p>No spoons.<br/></p><p>No pots.<br/></p><p>No footsteps.<br/></p><p>Just silence.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then—</p><p><br/></p><p>KRRRKK.</p><p><br/></p><p>A sound came from beneath the floorboards.</p><p><br/></p><p>Tunde froze.</p><p>The woman returned carrying a steaming plate of rice and meat.</p><p>The aroma nearly drove him mad.<br/></p><p>He grabbed the spoon instantly.<br/></p><p>“Ah-ah, wait,” the woman whispered sharply.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>He paused.</p><p>Her smile widened.<br/></p><p>“In this place… we pray before eating.”<br/></p><p>The lantern flickered.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>For one second, Tunde thought he saw shadows moving behind her inside the kitchen.</p><p><br/></p><p>Tall shadows.</p><p>Human-shaped.</p><p>Standing too still.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>He swallowed.</p><p><br/></p><p>“Aunty… you live here alone?”</p><p>The old woman tilted her head slowly.<br/></p><p>Then she laughed.<br/></p><p>Not loudly.<br/></p><p>Not normally.<br/></p><p>A thin, crackling laugh that sounded like bones snapping underwater.</p><p><br/></p><p>“Do I look alone?”</p><p>The lantern went out.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>Darkness swallowed the room instantly.</p><p>Tunde’s breath caught in his throat.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>Then he heard it.</p><p>Breathing.<br/></p><p>Not one person.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>Many.</p><p>Right behind him.<br/></p><p>Wet breathing.<br/></p><p>Slow breathing.<br/></p><p>Hungry breathing.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>His hands trembled as he reached for his phone flashlight—</p><p>—and something cold touched the back of his neck.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>A voice whispered directly into his ear.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>“Don’t turn around.”</p><p><br/></p><p>Tunde stopped breathing.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then the lantern came back on.</p><p><br/></p><p>The old woman was standing exactly where she had been before.</p><p><br/></p><p>Smiling.</p><p><br/></p><p>But now…</p><p><br/></p><p>There were four extra plates on the table.</p><p><br/></p><p>And seated around them were figures.</p><p><br/></p><p>Tall.</p><p><br/></p><p>Motionless.</p><p><br/></p><p>Covered in darkness.</p><p><br/></p><p>Tunde couldn’t see their faces.</p><p>But he noticed one thing immediately.<br/></p><p>Every single one of them was staring directly at him.<br/></p><p>The old woman slowly pushed his plate closer.<br/></p><p><br/></p><p>“Eat,” she whispered.</p><p><br/></p><p>“And try not to scream when they begin.”</p>

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