<p><br/></p><p>The Wrong Package — Part 4: The Man Who Died</p><p>Daniel stood completely still.</p><p>His father's name echoed in his mind.</p><p>Daniel Carter.</p><p>He looked at Marcus.</p><p>“My father didn't disappear.”</p><p>The woman behind the door said nothing.</p><p>Daniel continued, “He died when I was twelve.”</p><p>A quiet voice answered:</p><p>“That is what you were told.”</p><p>Daniel's hand tightened around the door handle.</p><p>“Who are you?”</p><p>“My name is Evelyn.”</p><p>“Evelyn what?”</p><p>“Evelyn Carter.”</p><p>Daniel's eyes widened.</p><p>“Carter?”</p><p>“Yes.”</p><p>Marcus stepped closer.</p><p>“Daniel, don't open that door.”</p><p>But Daniel was already turning the handle.</p><p>The door opened.</p><p>A woman in her late fifties stood in the hallway. She carried a small black handbag and looked completely calm.</p><p>She looked at Daniel for several seconds.</p><p>Then she smiled.</p><p>“You look exactly like him.”</p><p>“Like who?”</p><p>“Your father.”</p><p>Daniel stared at her.</p><p>“You knew him?”</p><p>Evelyn nodded.</p><p>“I knew him better than anyone.”</p><p>She reached into her handbag and pulled out an old photograph.</p><p>She handed it to Daniel.</p><p>The photograph showed three people standing outside a building.</p><p>A younger version of Daniel's father stood in the middle.</p><p>Beside him was Evelyn.</p><p>And on the other side was another man.</p><p>Daniel recognized him immediately.</p><p>It was the same man from the mysterious video.</p><p>Daniel's stomach dropped.</p><p>“Who is that?”</p><p>Evelyn looked at Marcus.</p><p>Then she looked back at Daniel.</p><p>“That's the man who caused your father's disappearance.”</p><p>Marcus suddenly stepped backward.</p><p>Daniel noticed.</p><p>“Marcus?”</p><p>Marcus didn't answer.</p><p>Evelyn's expression changed.</p><p>“Daniel, you need to leave this building immediately.”</p><p>“Why?”</p><p>“Because the person who took your computer knows we're here.”</p><p>Daniel turned toward Marcus.</p><p>“You said you didn't know anything about this.”</p><p>“I don't.”</p><p>Evelyn shook her head.</p><p>“He's telling the truth.”</p><p>Daniel looked confused.</p><p>“Then why did the message say I shouldn't have brought him?”</p><p>Evelyn smiled faintly.</p><p>“Because the message wasn't written for Marcus.”</p><p>She pointed at Daniel's phone.</p><p>“It was written for you.”</p><p>Daniel looked down.</p><p>A new message had arrived.</p><p>UNKNOWN NUMBER:</p><p>Ask Evelyn what happened on June 14th.</p><p>Daniel looked up.</p><p>“What happened on June 14th?”</p><p>Evelyn's face suddenly became serious.</p><p>“That was the night your father disappeared.”</p><p>Daniel's breathing slowed.</p><p>“You said he wasn't dead.”</p><p>“He isn't.”</p><p>The room went silent.</p><p>Daniel stared at her.</p><p>For years, he had believed his father was gone.</p><p>But now a stranger was standing in front of him, telling him the impossible.</p><p>“Where is he?”</p><p>Evelyn looked toward the window.</p><p>“He's been waiting for you.”</p><p>“Where?”</p><p>She reached into her handbag again.</p><p>This time, she pulled out a small envelope.</p><p>On the front was Daniel's name.</p><p>He opened it.</p><p>Inside was a photograph.</p><p>It showed an old house surrounded by trees.</p><p>On the back were six words:</p><p>“Come alone. Bring the five keys.”</p><p>Daniel looked at Evelyn.</p><p>“Where is this?”</p><p>She whispered the answer.</p><p>“The house where your father has been hiding for fourteen years.”</p><p>Marcus stepped forward.</p><p>“And if it's a trap?”</p><p>Evelyn looked directly at him.</p><p>“Then Daniel won't be the only one walking into it.”</p><p>Suddenly, every light in the building came back on.</p><p>Daniel's phone buzzed one final time.</p><p>UNKNOWN NUMBER:</p><p>You have 48 hours.</p><p>Then another message appeared.</p><p>And Daniel…</p><p>Your father knows you're coming.</p><p>Daniel stared at the screen.</p><p>For the first time, he wasn't wondering who was behind the mystery.</p><p>He was wondering whether he really wanted to meet the man he had spent fourteen years believing was dead.</p>
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