Some Journeys Begin with Excitement. Tola's Began with Death.
<p>Tola was fifteen years old.</p><p>He had never set foot in Nigeria.</p><p>Not because he didn't want to, but because his parents were unlike every African parent abroad that would go home annually.</p><p>They kept postponing every trip </p><p>"There will always be next year," Tola's father would say.</p><p>Until one morning, Tola's father was in the sitting room. He stretched his legs crossed on the center table </p><p>His eyes were pinned to the television, deeply engrossed in watching..</p><p>His phone rang.</p><p>Uncle Dele showed on the screen of the phone. He was Baba Agba's younger brother.</p><p>"Hello," </p><p>"Hello,"</p><p>Silence....</p><p>Tola's father glanced at the screen, because he thought the call had ended.</p><p>"How are you, uncle?" he inquired.</p><p>Uncle Dele sighed.</p><p>"Baba Agba has joined his ancestors," he said, his voice was trembling.</p><p>Baba Agba was Tola's father's father. A title man in Oko, a village located on Isapa Island.</p><p>He cleared his throat, "We are waiting for you to be present at the burial rite."</p><p>Uncle Dele couldn't even finish the conversation before tears overwhelmed his voice. His voice was cracking from hours of crying.</p><p>Tola's father's heart became heavy and breath began to gush out of his nostril.</p><p>Although he had not been to the village for a while, he always ensured he heard from Baba Agba. </p><p>They spoke regularly and Baba Agba hadn't complained about any illness.</p><p>It was later Tola's father got to know that the old man died peacefully in his sleep.</p><p>He broke the news to his family later that evening </p><p>On the dining table, the cutleries were clinking against the plates and the occasional grinding of teeth.</p><p>Tola coughed.</p><p>"Take it easy," Clara said softly. "Drink some water."</p><p>Clara's eyes drifted toward Tola's father and It was then she discovered that he hadn't taken a bite, Instead he was caressing the food with his fork.</p><p>"Honey, Are you okay?" she asked.</p><p>Tola's father looked up slowly. </p><p>His eyes were soaked with water and the weight they carried was impossible to hide.</p><p>He faked a smile.</p><p>"I am fine," he lied.</p><p>Clara frowned. She knew her husband was not telling the truth. She had lived enough with him to know when something was not right </p><p>"No," she said softly. "Something is wrong, honey."</p><p>Tola stopped eating and he moved his eyes from one parent to another.</p><p>Tola's father dropped the fork gently on the plate. He leaned his elbow against the table, fingers interlaced.</p><p>"I received a call from Uncle Dele this morning," he paused. "Baba Agba.... My father is dead."</p><p>The room fell into an uneasy silence. </p><p>The ticking clock on the wall seems louder than before.</p><p>He gently held the bridge of his nose and sniffed in the mucus that had gathered in his nostril </p><p>"I am so sorry," Clara whispered, as she stretched her hand across the table and held his hand.</p><p>He nodded without saying a word.</p><p>Tola swallowed hard, "Dad... I have never met Grandpa before"</p><p>His father looked at him. The water that gathered in his eyes were threatening to fall.</p><p>"I know."</p><p>"Was he a good man?"</p><p>"He was more than a good man. Everyone in Oko respected him. He cared for orphans, widows and he would never allow anyone to go hungry, if he could help it."</p><p>"Then why didn't we ever visit him?" Tola asked innocently.</p><p>He lowered his head.</p><p>"I kept postponing every trip. I kept telling myself there would be another opportunity. Work came first and your schooling. Before I knew it years had gone by."</p><p>His voice broke.</p><p>"And now..... there won't be another."</p><p>Clara shook his head slowly.</p><p>Her thumbs hovered the back of his hand.</p><p>"we'll go home," she said firmly "We'll give him a beautiful farewell"</p><p>Tola's father nodded.</p><p>"Uncle Dele said the family is waiting for us. We shall leave in three days."</p><p>Tola's heart froze.</p><p>Nigeria.</p><p>He would finally get a chance to visit his father's country. The country he had watched in documentaries, photographs and the stories his father told him in the quiet night.</p><p>He had envisioned the bustling cities, traditional festivals and Oko, a serene village where everyone knew one another .</p><p>Tola thought he was travelling to Nigeria to bury his grandfather. </p><p>Little did he know that, as the saying goes, what is after six is beyond seven.</p><p>He had no idea that Oko was waiting to bury the boy he used to be.</p><p>To be continued.......</p><p>@Olarewaju</p>
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