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Jhaymkay🖤 Nigeria
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THE FOURTH KNOCK
<p><br/></p><p>It's been a while since I wrote anything.</p><p>So I decided not to ease back into it.</p><p>Instead, I brought a story.</p><p>A strange one.</p><p>The kind that lingers in your mind long after you've finished reading.</p><p>Enjoy The Fourth Knock.</p><p>And if you hear someone knocking later today...</p><p>Well, that's probably just a coincidence.</p><p>Everyone in Oke-Agbọn knew the rule.</p><p>If you hear three knocks at night, ignore them.</p><p>If you hear a fourth, don't answer.</p><p>Nobody knew where the rule came from.</p><p>Nobody talked about it much.</p><p>But everybody followed it.</p><p>Except Tunde.</p><p>The knocks started on a Thursday.</p><p>He was studying alone in his apartment, preparing for an exam.</p><p>11:47 p.m.</p><p>Knock.</p><p>He looked up.</p><p>Someone at the door.</p><p>Annoyed, he checked his phone.</p><p>No missed calls.</p><p>No messages.</p><p>He walked to the peephole.</p><p>Nobody.</p><p>The hallway was empty.</p><p>He shrugged and returned to his desk.</p><p>Five minutes later:</p><p>Knock.</p><p>This time he frowned.</p><p>He opened the door immediately.</p><p>Nothing.</p><p>The corridor stretched in both directions.</p><p>Silent.</p><p>Empty.</p><p>A chill crept across his skin.</p><p>Still, he convinced himself it was some stupid prank.</p><p>Then came the third knock.</p><p>Knock.</p><p>Louder.</p><p>Slower.</p><p>As if whoever made it wanted him to know they were still there.</p><p>Tunde froze.</p><p>Something about the sound felt wrong.</p><p>Not the volume.</p><p>Not the timing.</p><p>The feeling.</p><p>It sounded close.</p><p>Too close.</p><p>Like the knock hadn't come from the door.</p><p>Like it had come from inside the apartment.</p><p>He locked the door.</p><p>Checked every room.</p><p>Nothing.</p><p>No one.</p><p>Eventually he laughed at himself and went to bed.</p><p>At 3:03 a.m., his phone vibrated.</p><p>One new message.</p><p>Unknown Number.</p><p>The text contained only five words.</p><p>Did you hear all three?</p><p>Tunde sat upright.</p><p>His heart pounded.</p><p>He typed back:</p><p>Who is this?</p><p>The reply came instantly.</p><p>Don't answer the fourth.</p><p>The message disappeared.</p><p>Not deleted.</p><p>Gone.</p><p>As if it had never existed.</p><p>Tunde stared at the screen.</p><p>Then his bedroom door creaked open.</p><p>Very slowly.</p><p>The hallway beyond was dark.</p><p>Darker than it should have been.</p><p>No moonlight.</p><p>No shadows.</p><p>Just black.</p><p>His throat tightened.</p><p>"Tunde."</p><p>A woman's voice.</p><p>Soft.</p><p>Gentle.</p><p>His mother's voice.</p><p>His mother lived hundreds of kilometers away.</p><p>"Tunde," it called again.</p><p>"Come here."</p><p>His blood turned cold.</p><p>He dialed his mother immediately.</p><p>The call connected.</p><p>She answered on the first ring.</p><p>"Tunde?"</p><p>Relief flooded through him.</p><p>"Mummy?"</p><p>"Yes?"</p><p>Before he could speak further, another voice whispered from the hallway.</p><p>The same voice.</p><p>His mother's voice.</p><p>"Tunde."</p><p>Now there were two.</p><p>One on the phone.</p><p>One outside his room.</p><p>Both speaking at the same time.</p><p>"Tunde."</p><p>The call disconnected.</p><p>His screen went black.</p><p>And then—</p><p>Knock.</p><p>The fourth knock.</p><p>Directly beneath his bed.</p><p>Tunde couldn't breathe.</p><p>The sound had come from under him.</p><p>Not the wall.</p><p>Not the floor.</p><p>Under the bed.</p><p>Slowly, something shifted beneath the mattress.</p><p>A weight.</p><p>As though someone had crawled underneath and was positioning themselves.</p><p>Waiting.</p><p>The room grew colder.</p><p>The darkness in the hallway began to spread.</p><p>Like liquid.</p><p>Sliding across the floor.</p><p>Moving toward him.</p><p>Then a voice emerged from beneath the bed.</p><p>His own voice.</p><p>Perfectly identical.</p><p>"Don't look down."</p><p>The mattress sank.</p><p>Just slightly.</p><p>As though a hand had pressed upward from underneath.</p><p>Tunde squeezed his eyes shut.</p><p>The room was silent.</p><p>For ten seconds.</p><p>Twenty.</p><p>Thirty.</p><p>Then curiosity won.</p><p>Just for a second, he thought.</p><p>Just one glance.</p><p>He leaned over the edge.</p><p>And looked.</p><p>The space beneath the bed wasn't there anymore.</p><p>No floor.</p><p>No dust.</p><p>No storage boxes.</p><p>Just darkness.</p><p>Endless darkness.</p><p>And deep within it, impossibly far away, thousands of pale faces stared back.</p><p>Smiling.</p><p>Waiting.</p><p>Watching.</p><p>One of them moved closer.</p><p>Then another.</p><p>Then another.</p><p>Not walking.</p><p>Not crawling.</p><p>Appearing closer each time he blinked.</p><p>Until one face reached the edge.</p><p>His face.</p><p>Smiling.</p><p>The thing beneath the bed whispered:</p><p>"Found you."</p><p>The lights went out.</p><p>The neighbors reported hearing a scream.</p><p>Just one.</p><p>Short.</p><p>Sudden.</p><p>The next morning, the apartment was empty.</p><p>No sign of Tunde.</p><p>No sign of a struggle.</p><p>Nothing missing.</p><p>Except for one thing.</p><p>His bed.</p><p>The bed had vanished.</p><p>In its place was a message scratched into the concrete floor:</p><p>THERE WAS NEVER A FOURTH KNOCK.</p><p>YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO NOTICE THE FIRST THREE CAME FROM INSIDE THE HOUSE.</p><p><br/></p><p>The fourth knock isn't the one you hear.</p>

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