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STILL YOU: SUNDAY (PART 2)
<p>By Sunday afternoon, Lauretta had almost convinced herself she had imagined the entire thing.</p><p><br/></p><p>Not Elias.</p><p><br/></p><p>Unfortunately, he was real.</p><p><br/></p><p>She had his number.</p><p><br/></p><p>He had hers.</p><p><br/></p><p>And Nadia had spent the better part of two days reminding her of that fact.</p><p><br/></p><p>But the feeling of Friday night had already begun to soften around the edges.</p><p><br/></p><p>It was easier that way.</p><p><br/></p><p>Lauretta liked things she could understand.</p><p><br/></p><p>She liked schedules, quiet mornings, expensive coffee, and knowing exactly where she stood with people.</p><p><br/></p><p>Elias was none of those things.</p><p><br/></p><p>He was an unanswered question in a very well-tailored suit.</p><p><br/></p><p>And she didn't like unanswered questions.</p><p><br/></p><p>Her phone was beside her on the kitchen counter.</p><p><br/></p><p>She glanced at it.</p><p><br/></p><p>Nothing.</p><p><br/></p><p>She looked away.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then glanced again.</p><p><br/></p><p>Still nothing.</p><p><br/></p><p>"Pathetic," she muttered.</p><p><br/></p><p>Her phone rang.</p><p><br/></p><p>Nadia.</p><p><br/></p><p>Lauretta answered.</p><p><br/></p><p>"Hello."</p><p><br/></p><p>"Have you heard from him?"</p><p><br/></p><p>"Good afternoon to you too."</p><p><br/></p><p>"That's not an answer."</p><p><br/></p><p>"No."</p><p><br/></p><p>There was silence.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then—</p><p><br/></p><p>"Interesting."</p><p><br/></p><p>"What's interesting?"</p><p><br/></p><p>"He hasn't texted you."</p><p><br/></p><p>"No."</p><p><br/></p><p>"And you're bothered."</p><p><br/></p><p>"I'm not bothered."</p><p><br/></p><p>"You're checking your phone."</p><p><br/></p><p>"I am not."</p><p><br/></p><p>"You just checked it."</p><p><br/></p><p>Lauretta looked down.</p><p><br/></p><p>Her phone was still in her hand.</p><p><br/></p><p>She sighed.</p><p><br/></p><p>"I hate you."</p><p><br/></p><p>"I know."</p><p><br/></p><p>They talked for another twenty minutes before Nadia finally hung up.</p><p><br/></p><p>Lauretta placed her phone on the counter.</p><p><br/></p><p>This time, she didn't look at it.</p><p><br/></p><p>She went upstairs instead.</p><p><br/></p><p>She changed into a white dress.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then changed again.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then decided she wasn't going anywhere.</p><p><br/></p><p>She made tea.</p><p><br/></p><p>Opened a book.</p><p><br/></p><p>Read the same paragraph three times.</p><p><br/></p><p>Finally, she closed it.</p><p><br/></p><p>Her phone remained silent.</p><p><br/></p><p>And strangely, that annoyed her more than it should have.</p><p><br/></p><p>---</p><p><br/></p><p>At 6:18 p.m., someone knocked on her door.</p><p><br/></p><p>Lauretta frowned.</p><p><br/></p><p>She wasn't expecting anyone.</p><p><br/></p><p>When she opened it, there was a man standing outside holding a small white box.</p><p><br/></p><p>"Ms. Lauretta?"</p><p><br/></p><p>"Yes?"</p><p><br/></p><p>"This was delivered for you."</p><p><br/></p><p>She took it.</p><p><br/></p><p>"Who sent it?"</p><p><br/></p><p>The man checked his phone.</p><p><br/></p><p>"Elias Vale."</p><p><br/></p><p>Her heart did something incredibly inconvenient.</p><p><br/></p><p>She closed the door.</p><p><br/></p><p>Walked into the living room.</p><p><br/></p><p>Put the box on the table.</p><p><br/></p><p>Stared at it.</p><p><br/></p><p>She didn't open it immediately.</p><p><br/></p><p>Instead, she made herself wait.</p><p><br/></p><p>Two minutes.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then five.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then she laughed at herself.</p><p><br/></p><p>"Ridiculous."</p><p><br/></p><p>She opened it.</p><p><br/></p><p>Inside was her missing earring.</p><p><br/></p><p>The one she'd thought she'd lost months ago.</p><p><br/></p><p>Lauretta picked it up.</p><p><br/></p><p>She stared at it.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then noticed the note beneath it.</p><p><br/></p><p>Four words.</p><p><br/></p><p>I think this is yours.</p><p><br/></p><p>She smiled.</p><p><br/></p><p>That was it.</p><p><br/></p><p>No flowers.</p><p><br/></p><p>No ridiculous declaration.</p><p><br/></p><p>No attempt to impress her.</p><p><br/></p><p>Just her earring.</p><p><br/></p><p>And somehow, that made it worse.</p><p><br/></p><p>She picked up her phone.</p><p><br/></p><p>Typed:</p><p><br/></p><p>Thank you.</p><p><br/></p><p>Deleted it.</p><p><br/></p><p>Typed:</p><p><br/></p><p>Where did you find this?</p><p><br/></p><p>Deleted that too.</p><p><br/></p><p>Finally:</p><p><br/></p><p>You could have just texted me.</p><p><br/></p><p>His reply came almost immediately.</p><p><br/></p><p>I could have.</p><p><br/></p><p>She waited.</p><p><br/></p><p>Another message appeared.</p><p><br/></p><p>But then I wouldn't have had an excuse to send someone to your door.</p><p><br/></p><p>Lauretta laughed.</p><p><br/></p><p>You're impossible.</p><p><br/></p><p>Three dots.</p><p><br/></p><p>You haven't known me long enough to say that.</p><p><br/></p><p>She smiled.</p><p><br/></p><p>Seven minutes, remember?</p><p><br/></p><p>There was a pause.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then:</p><p><br/></p><p>I remember.</p><p><br/></p><p>Something about those words made her stop.</p><p><br/></p><p>She stared at the screen.</p><p><br/></p><p>She didn't know why.</p><p><br/></p><p>Perhaps it was the wording.</p><p><br/></p><p>Perhaps it was simply the way he had said it.</p><p><br/></p><p>She typed:</p><p><br/></p><p>Goodnight, Elias.</p><p><br/></p><p>This time, he didn't answer immediately.</p><p><br/></p><p>A minute passed.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then two.</p><p><br/></p><p>Finally:</p><p><br/></p><p>Goodnight, Lauretta.</p><p><br/></p><p>She put the phone down.</p><p><br/></p><p>And smiled.</p><p><br/></p><p>---</p><p><br/></p><p>Three weeks passed.</p><p><br/></p><p>They didn't see each other.</p><p><br/></p><p>Not because either of them wasn't interested.</p><p><br/></p><p>Life simply had a way of being inconvenient.</p><p><br/></p><p>Lauretta travelled for work.</p><p><br/></p><p>Elias disappeared into meetings.</p><p><br/></p><p>They exchanged messages occasionally.</p><p><br/></p><p>Nothing serious.</p><p><br/></p><p>Nothing that could be called a relationship.</p><p><br/></p><p>Just small things.</p><p><br/></p><p>A photograph of a ridiculous painting he'd seen in Paris.</p><p><br/></p><p>A complaint from Lauretta about an awful hotel breakfast.</p><p><br/></p><p>A song.</p><p><br/></p><p>A joke.</p><p><br/></p><p>A photograph of the sunset from his balcony.</p><p><br/></p><p>Sometimes they spoke for hours.</p><p><br/></p><p>Sometimes neither said anything for days.</p><p><br/></p><p>It was strangely comfortable.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then, on a Thursday evening, Lauretta received a message.</p><p><br/></p><p>Not from Elias.</p><p><br/></p><p>From Nadia.</p><p><br/></p><p>Come to the gallery tonight.</p><p><br/></p><p>Lauretta frowned.</p><p><br/></p><p>Why?</p><p><br/></p><p>The reply came almost immediately.</p><p><br/></p><p>Just come.</p><p><br/></p><p>She almost refused.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then another message appeared.</p><p><br/></p><p>Please.</p><p><br/></p><p>So she went.</p><p><br/></p><p>The gallery was crowded.</p><p><br/></p><p>Music floated through the room, glasses clinked, and people moved between enormous photographs displayed against white walls.</p><p><br/></p><p>Lauretta walked slowly through the exhibition.</p><p><br/></p><p>She stopped in front of one.</p><p><br/></p><p>A lake.</p><p><br/></p><p>Quiet water.</p><p><br/></p><p>A woman standing at the edge.</p><p><br/></p><p>Something about it caught her attention.</p><p><br/></p><p>She stepped closer.</p><p><br/></p><p>The photograph was beautiful.</p><p><br/></p><p>But there was something familiar about the woman.</p><p><br/></p><p>Lauretta couldn't explain it.</p><p><br/></p><p>She stared at her face.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then looked at the small plaque beneath the photograph.</p><p><br/></p><p>ELIAS VALE</p><p><br/></p><p>Her breath caught.</p><p><br/></p><p>She looked around the gallery.</p><p><br/></p><p>And there he was.</p><p><br/></p><p>Across the room.</p><p><br/></p><p>Watching her.</p><p><br/></p><p>He wasn't smiling.</p><p><br/></p><p>Neither was she.</p><p><br/></p><p>For a moment, neither moved.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then Elias slowly walked toward her.</p><p><br/></p><p>When he reached her, he looked at the photograph.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then back at her.</p><p><br/></p><p>"Do you like it?"</p><p><br/></p><p>Lauretta nodded.</p><p><br/></p><p>"Very much."</p><p><br/></p><p>He looked at the photograph again.</p><p><br/></p><p>"Good."</p><p><br/></p><p>She turned toward him.</p><p><br/></p><p>"You took this?"</p><p><br/></p><p>"Yes."</p><p><br/></p><p>"When?"</p><p><br/></p><p>He hesitated.</p><p><br/></p><p>"Quite a while ago."</p><p><br/></p><p>She looked back at the woman.</p><p><br/></p><p>There was something she couldn't shake.</p><p><br/></p><p>Something about the photograph felt strangely personal.</p><p><br/></p><p>She pointed toward it.</p><p><br/></p><p>"Who is she?"</p><p><br/></p><p>Elias didn't answer.</p><p><br/></p><p>And for the first time since she'd met him, Lauretta saw something in his expression that she couldn't read.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then he said quietly,</p><p><br/></p><p>"I was hoping you wouldn't ask."</p><p><br/></p><p>And suddenly, the evening didn't feel quite so ordinary anymore.</p>

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