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Mudathir Abdul Hafiz Shoe making @ Dutse
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In Literature, Writing and Blogging • 2 min read • Apr 26, 2025 18:10p.m.
Who is at fault?
<p>So this Mama singlehandedly trained her two kids through school. They both got good jobs, the girl got married to a wealthy man and the boy got himself a working class wife&nbsp;</p><p><br></p><p>Years later, mama's daughter began to go about from one church to another in a bid to seek protection for her family and marriage since her husband was influential and had plenty known ënemies. Also, she was always being suspicious of everything and everyone around her.&nbsp;</p><p><br></p><p>She got to one prayer house one day and they told her how her old mother was the winch in her life. She took it to heart considering the fact that she once had a dream where her mother was trying to pour something on her at night&nbsp;</p><p><br></p><p>Few minutes after the revelation she called her brother and told him what the prophet had said and he got angry kicking against such revelation but his own wife concurred "I have been suspecting mama and dreaming about her whinch activities since we got married too but I didn't want to talk so that you wouldn't think I don't like your mother"</p><p><br></p><p>A seed was sown in all their minds</p><p><br></p><p>The man couldn't accept that but his sister who was always assisting him financially warned him to stay away from the winch otherwise she would never come close to him again&nbsp;</p><p><br></p><p>They all stayed away&nbsp;</p><p><br></p><p>Mama cr!ed nights after n!ghts wondering where she ever went wrong to end up being treated like that by the people she once went náked to be clothed</p><p><br></p><p>She kept praying and God also kept using neighbours and other people's children to bless her</p><p><br></p><p>Since aging doesn't like stress of the mind, she had to keep having unplanned visits to the hospital till it became worse&nbsp;</p><p><br></p><p>Her old time neighbours stood by her side all the way, the neighbours children sent numerous messages across to Mama's children telling them that if anything happens to their mother, they will live to regret it.</p><p><br></p><p>Days passed, mama was still in the hospital when her children's eyes cleared. Like a veil was lifted from their eyes&nbsp;</p><p><br></p><p>They ran immediately to the hospital where mama was admitted but few minutes after their arrival and pleas for forgiveness, mama passed away&nbsp;</p><p><br></p><p>Mama's son blames his sister for k!lling their mother by depriving her of her children's love and attention but his sister blames the person that told her mama was a winch now they live divided in regrets&nbsp;</p><p><br></p><p>Who is to blame for mama's de@th?</p><p><br></p><p>##Copied</p>
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