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Esther Alo Freelancer @ Adekunle Ajasin University Akungba Akoko • Lagos • 3 hours, 42 minutes ago
<p>Hmm first I love the cover image, it has a vibe to it🧡</p><p>I love the way you wrote the story, the pause, conversation, narration and so on</p><p>Very brilliant fr</p><p>But I'm not so satisfied with the ending...</p><p>I kinda like expected more unpredictable snippet of what really happened...</p><p>But anyways really lovely story🫶</p><p>If I ever meet Ayo, we'll have a long and interesting conversation</p><p>I have lots of questions about how he felt when he heard his friend who made a bet with him ended up marrying...</p>
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