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Farouq Baturen Shanu Momma's Boy @ Abubakar Tafawa Balewa University Bauchi • Bauchi • 14 hours, 41 minutes ago
<p>Bruhhhhhhhh.</p><p>What an opening chapter!!!!!</p><p>I knew this was going to be another banger series.</p><p>Narrative wise: Interesting premise already, I can sense that Tunde is about to deal with the consequences of his negligence and of his actions. That fear of consequences got over him and he chose drastic action.</p><p>And Craft wise: There is a simple kind of elegance with the way you wrote the story from the descriptions to the flow of the narrative. Brilliant joor.</p><p>Awaiting the next chapter. Tag me!!!!!</p>
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