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Muhammad Mercurial A serving corp member at the Nigeria Customs Headquarters... • Abuja • 1 day, 4 hours ago
<p>This one is giving “I said I’m done” but the heart never signed the agreement.</p><p>I like how the chapter captures that stubborn battle between sense and feelings.</p><p>She kept looking for permission from everyone else, but deep down, the real conversation was happening inside her.</p><p>And that ending, “so good and so forbidden” is a proper hook because now I need to know exactly what she accepted</p>
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Writewithoma Fiction Author || Autofiction writer || Freelance writer ... • Ikeja, Nigeria • 1 day, 3 hours ago

Thank you very much… let’s see how it goes .

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