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Muhammad Mercurial STRATEGIST OF EXUBERANT INTERNATIONAL WRITERS FOUNDATION.... • Abuja • 4 months, 4 weeks ago
<p>I love this</p><p>Dis is well-researched and confident in tone, but it leans heavily into argument and confrontation rather than balance.</p><p>Yr writing feels selective in its historical framing, using strong examples to prove a single point while overlooking broader context and complexity.</p><p>It would be stronger if it softened the absolutist claims and separated cultural history from modern gender debates more clearly.</p>
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Zipporah Nwachukwu Civil engineer @ LADAPA construction company • Abuja, Nigeria • 3 months, 3 weeks ago

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