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Samuel Olarewaju Student @ Federal university of kashere, Gombe state • Abuja • 1 month, 1 week ago
<p>This is dark .The way you gave each horseman their own voice made the whole piece feel like I was watching four different characters tell their stories.</p><p>The part about Death really got me. There’s something creepy about how calmly Death talks about being the one waiting for us at the end.</p><p>The imagery is intense, disturbing, and very vivid. Definitely not a poem you read and immediately forget. It stays with you.</p><p>Beautifully written. Keep it up</p>
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Murstradamus Poetry In Visual (Photography) • Lagos, Nigeria • 1 month, 1 week ago

I really wanted death to feel especially unsettling, not through aggression, but through that quiet certainty that makes him impossible to escape. Your words genuinely mean a lot to me. Thank you for reading and for the encouragement. 🙏❤️

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