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Samuel Olarewaju Student @ Federal university of kashere, Gombe state • Abuja • 1 month, 2 weeks ago
<p>Make I no lie you this work is complex but I like that sha</p><p>The poem feels soft but there’s also this quiet uncertainty running through it and even language.</p><p>I love the imagery throughout as well.</p><p>The line "in a garden of squashed colours my nervous smiles are cover by rustling leaves of uncertainty, when I feel your palm land softly" showing the state of the speaker when a unknown hand landed on him softly.</p><p>Iespecially liked the way you described the speaker’s feelings through simple...</p>
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Sailore Student @ Federal University, Oyé-Ekiti • Lagos, Nigeria • 1 month, 2 weeks ago

Yes, even when I was writing it, I felt that same complexity surging through me.

And the words; they did what they could do in helping find a quiet or romantic form of catharsis.

Thank you for reading my poem!

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