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Aishat Lukman Nigeria
Writer/storyteller/singer/student @ Prince Abubakar Audu University
Lokoja, Nigeria
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In Nigeria 3 min read
THE GIRL WHO RECEIVED A TEXT FROM HER FUTURE SELF CHAPTER FOUR — THE STRANGER AT THE DOOR
<p>Elaris rushed away from the window.</p><p>Her heart was pounding.</p><p>The stranger in the black hoodie was gone.</p><p>But she knew she hadn't imagined them.</p><p>Someone had been watching her.</p><p>She grabbed her phone and quickly locked the bedroom door.</p><p>For a few seconds, she stood there in silence.</p><p>Then—</p><p>KNOCK. KNOCK. KNOCK.</p><p>Elaris froze.</p><p>The sound came from downstairs.</p><p>Someone was at the front door.</p><p>She slowly walked into the hallway and looked over the railing.</p><p>“Mum?”</p><p>No answer.</p><p>Another knock.</p><p>This time, louder.</p><p>Elaris's mother appeared from the kitchen.</p><p>She looked toward the door.</p><p>Then toward Elaris.</p><p>And something about her expression made Elaris uneasy.</p><p>“Stay upstairs,” her mother said.</p><p>“Who is it?”</p><p>“I said stay upstairs.”</p><p>Her mother walked to the door.</p><p>Elaris didn't listen.</p><p>She quietly followed her.</p><p>Her mother opened the door slightly.</p><p>A man stood outside.</p><p>He looked familiar.</p><p>Elaris had never met him before, but something about his face made her feel like she had seen him somewhere.</p><p>The man looked past her mother.</p><p>His eyes landed on Elaris.</p><p>He immediately went silent.</p><p>Her mother stepped in front of Elaris.</p><p>“What do you want?”</p><p>The man lowered his voice.</p><p>“We need to talk.”</p><p>“Not here.”</p><p>“You know why I'm here.”</p><p>Her mother's face tightened.</p><p>“I told you never to come back.”</p><p>Elaris's eyes widened.</p><p>Never come back?</p><p>The man glanced at her again.</p><p>“Does she remember?”</p><p>Her mother didn't answer.</p><p>“Does she remember?” he repeated.</p><p>“No.”</p><p>The man sighed with relief.</p><p>Then Elaris spoke.</p><p>“I remember what?”</p><p>Both adults froze.</p><p>The man's face changed.</p><p>Her mother quickly turned around.</p><p>“Elaris, go upstairs.”</p><p>“No.”</p><p>“Elaris—”</p><p>“What does he mean by remember?”</p><p>The man stared at her for a long moment.</p><p>Then he slowly reached into his jacket.</p><p>Elaris stepped backward.</p><p>Her mother immediately shouted,</p><p>“Don't!”</p><p>The man stopped.</p><p>Instead of pulling something out, he carefully removed an old photograph.</p><p>He held it out toward Elaris.</p><p>“You need to see this.”</p><p>Her mother tried to take it from him.</p><p>But Elaris was faster.</p><p>She grabbed the photograph.</p><p>The moment she looked at it, her entire body went cold.</p><p>It was a photograph of her.</p><p>But not the Elaris standing in front of him.</p><p>This Elaris looked younger.</p><p>Much younger.</p><p>She was standing in front of a large building.</p><p>And beside her—</p><p>Daniel.</p><p>Elaris stared at the picture.</p><p>“What is this?”</p><p>The man looked at her sadly.</p><p>“You really don't remember.”</p><p>“Remember what?”</p><p>He didn't answer.</p><p>Elaris turned the photograph over.</p><p>There was a date written on the back.</p><p>SEPTEMBER 14TH — FIVE YEARS AGO.</p><p>Her breathing became shallow.</p><p>Five years ago.</p><p>The same date her future self had warned her about.</p><p>She looked at her mother.</p><p>“Mum…”</p><p>Her mother's eyes filled with tears.</p><p>“Please,” she whispered. “Don't ask me.”</p><p>Elaris looked back at the stranger.</p><p>“What happened on September 14th?”</p><p>The man hesitated.</p><p>Then he said the words that made Elaris's blood run cold.</p><p>“That's the day you disappeared.”</p><p>Elaris stared at him.</p><p>“What?”</p><p>“You disappeared for three days.”</p><p>Her mother covered her face.</p><p>Elaris couldn't speak.</p><p>She had no memory of it.</p><p>Not even a single moment.</p><p>The stranger stepped closer.</p><p>“And when you came back…”</p><p>He stopped.</p><p>“What?”</p><p>He looked directly into Elaris's eyes.</p><p>“You weren't the same.”</p><p>Suddenly, Elaris's phone vibrated.</p><p>Everyone looked at it.</p><p>UNKNOWN NUMBER</p><p>A new message appeared.</p><p>“He's telling you the truth.”</p><p>Elaris's hands trembled.</p><p>Then another message appeared.</p><p>“But he's not telling you everything.”</p><p>Elaris looked up at the stranger.</p><p>He had gone pale.</p><p>Because he had seen the message too.</p><p>And for the first time, Elaris realized something terrifying.</p><p>The stranger knew about her future self.</p><p>TO BE CONTINUED…</p>

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