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Favour Joseph Adi Freelance writer and Entrepreneur @ Abuja • Abuja • 2 weeks, 1 day ago
<p>You can keep this simple and human:</p><p>The transition from the carefree club atmosphere to that sudden chaos was intense. The way you captured the confusion, fear, and helplessness made the ending hit hard. That last line especially stayed with me.</p>
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Emevusi Student @ University of Benin • Benin City, Nigeria • 2 weeks, 1 day ago

glad you enjoyed it, i was skeptical about the plot of story tho

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