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Amorr
Student @ Obafemi Awolowo University
Student @ Obafemi Awolowo University
Pain
<p>PAIN</p><p><br/></p><p>"I drive through the air into the sea</p><p>My mind afar off into an abyss of love </p><p>I swim through the sky </p><p>I skim through the trees, like I could read the secret of their roots</p><p><br/></p><p>My mind afar off into a land </p><p>A land I feel but can't see</p><p>Sometimes I try to be twisted </p><p>But all is a lie </p><p><br/></p><p>I am a single thing </p><p>A single thing you can feel</p><p>A single thing only you can see</p><p>My masks is crooked</p><p><br/></p><p>Every stretched scar on me is happiness,</p><p>Is love,</p><p>Is trust,</p><p>Is peace,</p><p>All this is me</p><p>I am hidden beneath it all</p><p><br/></p><p>I refuse to be seen</p><p>I wish to be seen</p><p><br/></p><p>My masked is crooked</p><p>And the mark is me."</p><p><br/></p><p>- Ayobami Nollah </p><p>Hi everyone, hope you are had a great day. Please I need your feedback on my poem .</p><p>Tell me what you think.</p><p>What confuses you.</p><p>What was obvious to you.</p><p>I hope you enjoyed it. My name is Ayobami Nollah and I am writer( poet), whether it is storytelling, creative writing, poetry , research, whatever it is you can trust me with it.</p>
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