<p>PART TEN — THE GIRL WHO WOKE UP</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p>The old woman smiled.</p><p><br/></p><p>“Run.”</p><p><br/></p><p>Amy grabbed the girl's hand.</p><p><br/></p><p>They ran.</p><p><br/></p><p>Past the kitchen.</p><p><br/></p><p>Past their mother.</p><p><br/></p><p>Past the little girls who stood silently in the hallway.</p><p><br/></p><p>But the house seemed to grow longer with every step.</p><p><br/></p><p>Door after door appeared.</p><p><br/></p><p>And behind every door—</p><p><br/></p><p>someone was crying.</p><p><br/></p><p>“Don't look,” Amy whispered.</p><p><br/></p><p>But the girl stopped.</p><p><br/></p><p>One door was slightly open.</p><p><br/></p><p>Inside, she saw herself.</p><p><br/></p><p>Sleeping.</p><p><br/></p><p>In her bedroom.</p><p><br/></p><p>She stared at the sleeping girl.</p><p><br/></p><p>Then looked at Amy.</p><p><br/></p><p>“That's me.”</p><p><br/></p><p>Amy's face changed.</p><p><br/></p><p>“No.” </p><p><br/></p><p>The girl stepped closer. </p><p><br/></p><p>“That is me.” </p><p><br/></p><p>“No,” Amy repeated. </p><p><br/></p><p>“That's the girl you were supposed to become.” </p><p><br/></p><p>The girl turned.</p><p><br/></p><p>“What does that mean?”</p><p><br/></p><p>Amy's eyes filled with tears.</p><p><br/></p><p>“You were never the one who survived.” </p><p><br/></p><p>Silence. </p><p><br/></p><p>Then the girl heard a voice behind her. </p><p><br/></p><p>Her own voice. </p><p><br/></p><p>“Wake up.” </p><p><br/></p><p>Everything disappeared. </p><p><br/></p><p>She opened her eyes. </p><p><br/></p><p>Her bedroom. </p><p><br/></p><p>Morning. </p><p><br/></p><p>Sunlight. </p><p><br/></p><p>Her mother was sitting beside the bed, crying. </p><p><br/></p><p>“Mum?” </p><p><br/></p><p>Her mother grabbed her hand. </p><p><br/></p><p>“You're awake.” </p><p><br/></p><p>The girl looked around. </p><p><br/></p><p>Everything was normal. </p><p><br/></p><p>No blood. </p><p><br/></p><p>No Amy. </p><p><br/></p><p>No old woman. </p><p><br/></p><p>She laughed nervously. </p><p><br/></p><p>“It was all a dream.” </p><p><br/></p><p>Her mother didn't answer. </p><p><br/></p><p>The girl sat up. </p><p><br/></p><p>Then she noticed something on her wrist. </p><p><br/></p><p>A thin red mark. </p><p><br/></p><p>Like a handprint. </p><p><br/></p><p>She slowly looked toward the mirror. </p><p><br/></p><p>Her reflection was smiling.</p><p><br/></p><p>But she wasn't.</p><p><br/></p><p>The girl froze.</p><p><br/></p><p>Her reflection raised one finger to its lips.</p><p><br/></p><p>“Shh.”</p><p><br/></p><p>Then it whispered:</p><p><br/></p><p>“She thinks you're Eni.” </p><p><br/></p><p>The girl stopped breathing. </p><p><br/></p><p>Behind her reflection stood Amy. </p><p><br/></p><p>The girl turned around. </p><p><br/></p><p>Nobody. </p><p><br/></p><p>She looked back at the mirror. </p><p><br/></p><p>Amy was still there. </p><p><br/></p><p>And this time, she wasn't smiling. </p><p><br/></p><p>She pointed toward the bedroom door. </p><p><br/></p><p>The girl slowly turned. </p><p><br/></p><p>Her mother was standing there. </p><p><br/></p><p>Holding a knife. </p><p><br/></p><p>The exact same knife from the dream. </p><p><br/></p><p>Her mother whispered: </p><p><br/></p><p>“You remembered.” </p><p><br/></p><p>The girl stared at her. </p><p><br/></p><p>“No…” </p><p><br/></p><p>Her mother stepped forward. </p><p><br/></p><p>“You were never supposed to wake up.” </p><p><br/></p><p>The girl looked at the mirror one last time. </p><p><br/></p><p>Amy mouthed something. </p><p><br/></p><p>RUN. </p><p><br/></p><p>The lights went out. </p><p><br/></p><p>And in the darkness, the girl's voice whispered: </p><p><br/></p><p>“Mum…” </p><p><br/></p><p>Her mother answered from somewhere behind her. </p><p><br/></p><p>“Yes, Eni?” </p><p><br/></p><p>The girl swallowed. </p><p><br/></p><p>Then smiled. </p><p><br/></p><p>Because she finally understood. </p><p><br/></p><p>Her mother had just called her by the wrong name. </p><p><br/></p><p>And somewhere in the darkness— </p><p><br/></p><p>Amy laughed. </p><p><br/></p><p>THE END.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>
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